Skip to the draft I planned to do another day-by-day journal, but things…things aren’t great. Last week the doctor called about the tests I had and made an appointment for a biopsy. I can’t get in until September 8th. Let’s just say that is a long ass time to be […]

Writer in Motion Week 3: CP Edits


Unicorn Tracks Cambriea crushed a sweet raspberry against the roof of her mouth as she stalked the woods, searching the ground and bushes for plants to forage. Berries were abundant, along with hazelnuts and mushrooms. What she couldn’t find was animal tracks. She needed to hunt, but the forest was […]

Writer in Motion Week 3: CP Edited Draft


or make this suitable for the eyes of othersTo skip to the draft click here. Saturday August 8, 2020 To share my process, I thought it would take several posts, but I will show each layer in a linked post in case you want to see the changes. I also […]

Writer in Motion Week 2: Self edits



As Cambriea walked through the woods, she searched the ground and bushes for plants to forage. Berries were abundant, along with hazelnuts and mushrooms. What she wasn't seeing was animal tracks.

Writer in Motion: Self-edited draft


rip and tear edition Trying to figure out what I’m doing. this is layer one. Rip off the unstable stuff. It’s not bad–this just isn’t the spot for it. It’s too long, at around 1800 words. just skim though to see how much got the axe. Days later she went […]

Writer in Motion Self-edits in progress


To skip to the first draft click here Sunday, August 2, 2020 My night wasn’t great, so I’m dragging a little today. I am exhausted, but it’s like I have a squirrel in my head.  This new character has way more energy than most of my other ones. She doesn’t […]

Writer In Motion: Week One